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Post by fred on Oct 2, 2011 21:56:00 GMT -5
Ok so I had an idea for a plot with Frederic. It requires someone sneaky and very manipulative and someone that does not like Fred very much which should not be hard since Fred has made more than enough of his own enemies. The past can only stay hidden for so long until it comes back to bite you and there is no one more deserving of karma than the Swiss prince. From a young age Fred has been very involved in football and he is good. Hence why he is the captain at Vineheart. When he was 14 he got tackled and the guy was significantly larger than him and it wrecked his knee, he had reconstructive surgery to repair the ligaments but if anyone has experience with knee surgery is you are never quite the same after. Fred is stubborn though and stuck close to the doctors’ orders and even though he was not nearly 100% hes been back playing football since without his parents knowing (he and his brothers keep this a secret). So someone needs to take an interest in the scar on his knee and the occasional days he walks with a limp and after he gets hit again in a game and is trying to make a comeback and self-destructing they need to expose him (for his own good so he stops and goes to the doctor). Warning: if you choose to be this person there is no way that Fred will ever be on good terms with the character because he does not believe in forgiving an since football means so much to him he is going to be devastated.
Let me know any ideas.
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Post by anastasiya svetlana of russia on Oct 2, 2011 22:03:43 GMT -5
literally, just saw this and hopped on. I've got Ana here, who's in Fred's year, and a little too observant for her own good, or Fred's, depending. she picks on small details with body language and tone, because she'd sort of the outsider that watches everyone else do things and has had a lot of time to develop her skills. ergo, this is something she'd definitely notice. she isn't usually socially active, but she'd probably be curious about this, and would hesitate at first, but ask about the scar, notice him limping and contact him about it. she's not the type to care about ruining people, but if she thought it was for his own good, she'd definitely say something, and wouldn't mind that he hated her. (I think we have them as indifferent or she doesn't trust him, already. soo...) anyway, that's what I propose, if someone else would be better, go for it.
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Post by fred on Oct 4, 2011 12:42:48 GMT -5
Sorry I did not reply to this earlier I managed to miss it when I seemed to check on it ! It sounds great because she is not overly connected with him and he would never expect her to have noticed all this. I was thinking what would happen would be that he would get hit hard in a practice and the coach would force one of the team mates to take him to the doctor where they told him basically that hes an idiot and should not be playing and end up giving him a cortisone injection in the knee, but he is going to end up convincing the doctor to send the coach a note saying that its just a strained muscle and he will be back in two weeks (because cortisone tests for two weeks I believe) in this two weeks he is going to be practicing at night, but extremely frustrated since its not going very well, maybe this is when she catches him? If its already I will start a thread for this?
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Post by anastasiya svetlana of russia on Oct 4, 2011 16:40:39 GMT -5
that's fine, don't worry about it. it makes sense that he'd try to press on and play. it's highly probable that ana would go out walking during the night, so she'd probably happen upon him. sounds fine to me. feel free to get the thread up ^-^
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